Friday, September 12, 2008

Bumping into Mr. Ravioli

I just got finished reading this essay and i thought it was really cute. At the beginning i kind of enjoyed it for a while. Towards the middle, i had no idea what the author was talking about anymore and i just did not understand it and could not pay attention. He was mentioning all these names and i really had no idea who they were. When it got towards the end of the essay, i started to enjoy it a little bit more. I liked when he was just telling the story about his daughter and her imaginary friend...and i did not like when he would take up a whole page just...explaining something that was not really part of the story.

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